來(lái)源:中考網(wǎng)整理 作者:中考網(wǎng)小編 2011-09-13 11:29:13
【習(xí)作要求】
Writeaboutwhatyouaregoingtodoafteryouleaveschool.
【參考范文】
WhenIfinishschool,Iwanttobeateacher.Thoughteachersarepoorlypaidandtheyhavenopower,teachersarekind,
respectableandlearned,likeangels.
Theyleadthepathwaytosucceed.It‘squitesurethatteachersareveryimportantinmodernworld.
Wecan’tdevelopourcountrywithoutknowledge.
Teachersteachusknowledge.Ilikeallofmyteachersinmyschool.IwouldliketobeanEnglishteacher.
It‘sveryimportantforthestudentstolearnEnglishwelltoday.
I’lltrymybesttobeanidealteacher.Mystudentscanmakeourcountrybetterinthefuture.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇闡述觀點(diǎn)的議論文,作者用簡(jiǎn)潔而流暢的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)了長(zhǎng)大后想成為一名老師的愿望。論據(jù)充分,觀點(diǎn)明確,并且字里行間滲透了對(duì)祖國(guó)的無(wú)比熱愛之情和把祖國(guó)建設(shè)更加美好的。
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